Thursday, February 9, 2012

Vignette of a true India

A VISIT TO THE ORPHANGE

Monday, March 1, 2010, 0:49
This news item was posted in Literary Zone category and has 9 Comments so far.

Get on well with the delicate empathy ANAGHA KRISHNAMOORTHY experienced and portrayed here in her short poem. It came never through a passer by as it would usually be, but by living through the turmoils of the most difficult part of our life – understanding.

HOLDING THE SARI TIP OF HER “MOTHER”,

THERE STOOD A SWEET LITTLE GIRL OF ABOUT THREE,

SHE HAD AN INNOCENT SMILE ON HER BRIGHT FACE

WHICH REFLECTED HER FUTURE TO THE FULLEST..

WHEN I CALLED HER BY MY SIDE;SHE CAME RUNNING

I FELT AS THOUGH SHE SAW ME AS HER “MOTHER”

WE WENT FOR A STROLL AND ENJOYED THE BREEZE

JUST WHEN SHE HAD TO START QUESTIONING ME!!

WELL,I ANSWERED THEM ALL WILLINGLY,FOR ALL I KNOW..

THEN,FOR A SPLIT SECOND OR SO I STOOD DUMBSTRUCK

SHE  STARTED HER QUERIES

ARDUOUS  FOR HER AGE

AS TO WHOM DID I BELONG,WHO WERE MY PARENTS..

SENSING MY DIFFICULTY TO PUT THE ANSWERS  ACROSS,

SHE THANKFULLY WENT TANGENTIAL,

ABOUT DEERS AND DOVES, BUT..

BUT I STOPPED HER,TOOK HER IN MY ARMS AND SAID,

“I’M AN ORPHAN LIKE YOU.I HAVE NO MOTHER OF MY OWN”.

HER REACTION WAS JUST HOW I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE,

SHE LOOKED GLOOMY, SOBBED FOR LONG,

HER HEART BROKE..

HOW WILL A GIRL OF THREE VALUE THE FACT-

THAT SHE TOO HAD NO MOTHER LIKE ME?

THOUGH I VISIT THE ORPHANAGE QUITE OFTEN,

THIS WEEK’S VISIT LEFT MY HEART HEAVY

AND MY MIND THOUGHTFUL,

AS I WENT MY WAY HAULING THIS MEMORY,

OF THE INNOCENT LITTLE GIRL LED UNDISTURBED..

LED BLINDLY BY ALL THE LOVE AND AFFECTION,

FROM ALL SIDES,ALL AURA AND ALL DIMENSIONS OF HER..YET,

HOW WILL A GIRL OF THREE UNDERSTAND THE FACT,

THAT SHE TOO HAD NO MOTHER OF HER OWN??

pixel A VISIT TO THE ORPHANGE
share save 171 16 A VISIT TO THE ORPHANGE

No related posts.

You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

9 Responses to “A VISIT TO THE ORPHANGE”

  1. Meera Menon said on Monday, March 1, 2010, 1:13

    A very touching poem, really.

  2. santhosh said on Monday, March 1, 2010, 7:09

    Really touching one. God will be always with them.

  3. Aakash Prasad said on Tuesday, March 2, 2010, 3:56

    This is a poem. At last it is found out that what is the difference between a simple narration and a poetic verse. Hats off…!

  4. Ravi Padinjare said on Wednesday, March 3, 2010, 1:54

    Smart one …really liked the feel of the poem

  5. Tadgata Choudhury said on Thursday, March 4, 2010, 15:01

    Plain and simple style of narrating one’s experience with the orphan gave this poem such a strong and emotional feel to it..
    Hats off to Anagha..

  6. roopa said on Saturday, March 6, 2010, 7:13

    so nice….poem.. u hav d potential to become a poet in future!

  7. beulah said on Saturday, March 6, 2010, 7:17

    you have a bright career in poetry!cool man..

  8. Tadgata Choudhury said on Saturday, March 6, 2010, 14:22

    @ anagha
    we r waiting to hear another1 from u…..

  9. sushma said on Sunday, March 7, 2010, 7:20

    me very proud that she is my COUSIN!! YEY!!!! =D i always love poems!!! n this one was jus too good!!! L.O.V.E.D IT!!!

Leave a Reply

Spam Protection by WP-SpamFree

Rss Feed Tweeter button Facebook button